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Post by cneozioc stdoz on Jan 15, 2015 0:31:15 GMT
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Post by Theropod on Jan 15, 2015 3:05:22 GMT
If we're to give opinions, then you need to move the toes. Also, overall trailing.
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Post by Theropod on Jan 15, 2015 3:35:41 GMT
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Post by Theropod on Jan 15, 2015 4:00:30 GMT
By having the stick follow its onion skins more smoothly
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Post by es1001 on Jan 15, 2015 5:52:14 GMT
Yeah, what Theropod said. Not gonna rank you since you asked, but here's my opinion. Your movements are smooth, but don't flow into eachother properly. You're great at easing, but not trailing. That's fine though, easy to fix and I can see you improving that fast.
Also, you should try and add more complex movements. Everything looks a bit stiff at the moment. Try moving more segments, which will also create more flow.
You're pretty bloody good though already.
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Post by Theropod on Jan 15, 2015 15:46:15 GMT
I am not one to be ranked. But I would like your onions on the crapiness of this animation
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Post by Theropod on Jan 15, 2015 15:50:44 GMT
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Post by themechabaryonyx789 on Jan 15, 2015 16:37:31 GMT
Very nice work, any constructive criticism has already been given by es1001 and Theropod
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