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Post by dragino on Nov 1, 2015 18:23:52 GMT
{This is a test story. If ya'll like it, then feel free to comment. If you do like it, then I may continue it.}
This color is the alpha female leader Rugops This color is the male Rugops This color is one of the pack members of the Rugops pack
North Africa, 100 million years ago Chapter 1 Giant Strange Monsters Rushing rivers. Broken twigs. Sand and pebbles on the banks. And a carcass on one side. Rotting slowly, the carcass had many deep rips and tears into flesh. Upon further inspection, the carcass is identified as a large marine creature called Onchopristis dunklei, a giant sawfish with a long snout and many barbed teeth across it. Near it, water seems to have gone through the cracks in the pebbles, dyed a blood red from it being dragged onto land forcefully quite recently. A fresh smell still in the air, something had definitely killed it, but what? Thumps, thuds, growls, and snarls are heard each day so there is multiple guesses. Rustles in the bushes, and a head pokes out. Sniffing around, it catches sight of the carcass. With a huff, it cautiously, and very slowly steps out, full body revealed. This creature, presumably an abelisaurid, and a male, is named Rugops primus, meaning 'first wrinkle-face'. He stares intently at the carcass, lowering his snout. Sitting down, he takes a bite, trying his best to look behind himself. Of course, eating something is going to attract unwanted attention. Picking up multiple new scents, the abelisaurid stands back up, snarling defensively with a bloody maw. Four Rugops suddenly strut out of the bushes, growling at each other, and the male Rugops. Warning the four by snapping his jaws, and digging marks into the sand, he begins to make mock-charges, telling them to back off. One of the females in the group chuffs, which the others then reply with hisses and growls. The male finally decides to attack one of them, which he then charges at the dominant female who chuffed, snapping his jaws onto her neck. The others immediately gang on top of him, holding him down. The female growls, looking down at him with a cold glare, I shall not let you destroy me. You got that? If you let us eat the carcass, we shall leave you be. She snorts at him, and awaits his decision while the others overpower him, ...Grrr... Dirty bitch. After the male utters his speech, one of the Rugops stomps on his back, though not breaking a piece of vertebrate, Don't you dare speak to the leader like that! How would you like it if I said that to yo-- It's fine. Besides, being called a bitch is much better than being called you know who~ They snorted angrily, and stopped stepping on him, So, what is your choice? Either you die by refusing, leave and let us feast, or you join us. The pack members let go of him, leaving him to stand up. He glared at them, but suddenly his expression changed as he heard large stomps, and hisses. He backed up against the carcass, and began to run. The pack members snorted as he ran off, and they took steps forward, Wait a second, troops. They all looked back at the alpha, Something isn't right. And they were definitely right...
{I hope all of you enjoyed this. It is short, but of course, it's only a test, and one chapter.}
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Post by Theropod on Nov 1, 2015 18:40:25 GMT
I love it how details are described skillfully, very nice
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Post by dragino on Nov 1, 2015 18:45:30 GMT
I love it how details are described skillfully, very nice Ayyyyyeee, thanks Theropod! I'm a bit rusty with this type of stuff, but I tried my best.
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Post by Theropod on Nov 1, 2015 19:09:15 GMT
You don't look rusty, this is awesome! You're welcome
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Post by dragino on Nov 1, 2015 19:17:23 GMT
You don't look rusty, this is awesome! You're welcome Heheh. Thank you again! xD
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Post by Theropod on Nov 1, 2015 19:19:03 GMT
Welcome
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Post by Rexog on Nov 3, 2015 16:57:53 GMT
I wasn't expecting the dinosaurs' dialog, but maybe this added some originality to the text. Great job!
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Post by themechabaryonyx789 on Nov 17, 2015 22:10:29 GMT
Nice
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Post by 2pac on Nov 28, 2015 21:15:53 GMT
Nice stuff, I wanna see more!
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Post by Crocodylus on Dec 20, 2015 12:51:35 GMT
Very interesting!
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Post by dragino on Feb 7, 2016 16:29:39 GMT
Thank all of you.
Also, I think I will continue onto this story.
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Post by Theropod on Feb 7, 2016 16:33:54 GMT
Please do, I'd love to see how it would continue!
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Post by Halcyon on Feb 15, 2016 4:00:19 GMT
This is very cool, a very good read I certainly want to see more.
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I heard inhaling it helps your nose congestion and all.
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Post by superhamdav on Mar 8, 2016 5:24:44 GMT
m8, this is gr8. I want more.
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