Tech DC
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Post by Tech DC on Feb 26, 2017 17:27:45 GMT
Welcome to my thread, I will try to post here often. Any and all feedback welcome and appreciated! Latest Animation: 26.02.2017.3 Animation made to showcase one of the styles I am capable of animating with. Credit to DinoMorph for the impressive stk used in the animation above. 26.02.2017.1.Piv: Click hereI thank the animator atrox for the .piv I got that stick from, as well as inspiration. More to be posted soon.
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parasaurolophus
And they say Swans and Geese were the same animal :P
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Post by parasaurolophus on Feb 26, 2017 19:08:19 GMT
Dang. That is a good start man! Very smooth too! Keep it up man!
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Tech DC
Dilophosaurus
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Post by Tech DC on Feb 26, 2017 19:28:00 GMT
Thank you! Appreciated.
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And they say Swans and Geese were the same animal :P
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Post by parasaurolophus on Feb 26, 2017 19:33:56 GMT
Your very welcome!
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YourAverageBritishThescelosaur
Yutyrannus
Rawr.
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Spinosaurus Aegyptiacus
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Post by YourAverageBritishThescelosaur on Feb 26, 2017 19:37:05 GMT
Easing, flow and movement is great. Zappy tail at the end, the mouth opens too much (use a different stk) and the arms go too crazy.
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Tech DC
Dilophosaurus
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Post by Tech DC on Feb 26, 2017 21:06:46 GMT
Easing, flow and movement is great. Zappy tail at the end, the mouth opens too much (use a different stk) and the arms go too crazy. Thanks for the honest feedback! I see what you mean with the tail, I meant it to be whip-like so maybe seeing it that way diminishes the problem.
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Post by Theropod on Feb 26, 2017 22:02:59 GMT
Let me start by saying this belongs nowhere in Beginners lmao. First thing I thought about when I saw this was flow. That's what I'm talking about when I talk about flow. You go out of your way to animate something not so predictable and you do that skillfully. You're right on the tail thing, it needs to be interpreted the right way to be seen the way you want it to be seen, which is something you could work on. But interpreting it as a whip-like movement, I can see the clever way you animated the tail, with aggressive acceleration and joints moving more wildly. The neck flows. It just flows. I dropped the frame rate to 6.7fps and added black segments connecting each dynamic segment on the neck to show this more clearly. You made everything move, even the base of the neck, without the movements being exaggerated - that's a great demonstration of flow. Out of your skills, your flow is definitely the most impressive to me. The arms are off towards the end, but overall not a huge problem. I love the way they slow down. They could be a bit slower, but the way they are moving, mostly before the ending part, is really good looking. Your easing in the entire animation is on point, right now the only thing you gotta do it just keep improving it because you're already going the right way. Medium-High Intermediate level, easily. Moved to Intermediate.
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Tech DC
Dilophosaurus
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Post by Tech DC on Feb 27, 2017 3:17:21 GMT
Let me start by saying this belongs nowhere in Beginners lmao. First thing I thought about when I saw this was flow. That's what I'm talking about when I talk about flow. You go out of your way to animate something not so predictable and you do that skillfully. You're right on the tail thing, it needs to be interpreted the right way to be seen the way you want it to be seen, which is something you could work on. But interpreting it as a whip-like movement, I can see the clever way you animated the tail, with aggressive acceleration and joints moving more wildly. The neck flows. It just flows. I dropped the frame rate to 6.7fps and added black segments connecting each dynamic segment on the neck to show this more clearly. You made everything move, even the base of the neck, without the movements being exaggerated - that's a great demonstration of flow. Out of your skills, your flow is definitely the most impressive to me. The arms are off towards the end, but overall not a huge problem. I love the way they slow down. They could be a bit slower, but the way they are moving, mostly before the ending part, is really good looking. Your easing in the entire animation is on point, right now the only thing you gotta do it just keep improving it because you're already going the right way. Medium-High Intermediate level, easily. Moved to Intermediate. You're awesome Thank you for the feedback!
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Tech DC
Dilophosaurus
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Post by Tech DC on Feb 27, 2017 3:22:40 GMT
Just finished this animation to showcase one of the styles I'm capable of animating with. 26.02.2017.3Credit to DinoMorph for the impressive stk used in the animation above.
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And they say Swans and Geese were the same animal :P
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Post by parasaurolophus on Feb 27, 2017 20:03:26 GMT
You keep on impressing me my friend! Keep going! I really love the chomping effect you did too!
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Yutyrannus
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Post by Drakus on Feb 28, 2017 10:51:25 GMT
Welcome to my thread, I will try to post here often. Any and all feedback welcome and appreciated! Latest Animation: 26.02.2017.3 Animation made to showcase one of the styles I am capable of animating with. Credit to DinoMorph for the impressive stk used in the animation above. 26.02.2017.1.Piv: Click hereI thank the animator atrox for the .piv I got that stick from, as well as inspiration. More to be posted soon.
Keep em coming dude. The Flow levels are off the charts, and I'm happy to see more people animating their tails like that. It's satisfying
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Tech DC
Dilophosaurus
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Post by Tech DC on Feb 28, 2017 22:04:59 GMT
You keep on impressing me my friend! Keep going! I really love the chomping effect you did too! Thanks, glad you like it!
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Post by parasaurolophus on Feb 28, 2017 22:05:30 GMT
Your welcome!
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Tech DC
Dilophosaurus
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Post by Tech DC on Feb 28, 2017 22:06:28 GMT
Welcome to my thread, I will try to post here often. Any and all feedback welcome and appreciated! Latest Animation: 26.02.2017.3 Animation made to showcase one of the styles I am capable of animating with. Credit to DinoMorph for the impressive stk used in the animation above. 26.02.2017.1.Piv: Click hereI thank the animator atrox for the .piv I got that stick from, as well as inspiration. More to be posted soon.
Keep em coming dude. The Flow levels are off the charts, and I'm happy to see more people animating their tails like that. It's satisfying Happy to hear that! Thank you my friend
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