DaJetsnake
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DaJetsnake
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Post by DaJetsnake on Feb 21, 2016 2:28:12 GMT
So. I thought this might be the time to improve with honest criticism (and only honest criticism):
This one was pretty old, SOO Idk
This one was trying to get rid of rust, so it IS horrible.
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Hainosaurus is now congeneric with Tylosaurus. I guess that means that it's Tylosaurus bernardi now.
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I heard inhaling it helps your nose congestion and all.
Whatha's dayuinausoar?
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Post by superhamdav on Feb 23, 2016 20:29:23 GMT
nice, but since im at school, ill judge when i get home
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Hainosaurus is now congeneric with Tylosaurus. I guess that means that it's Tylosaurus bernardi now.
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superhamdav
Macrophyseter Pictures
Discord>Skype, whatever that is.
I heard inhaling it helps your nose congestion and all.
Whatha's dayuinausoar?
Tylosaurinae mosasaurs
http://i.imgur.com/Ai7iPV0.png
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Post by superhamdav on Feb 24, 2016 1:37:51 GMT
Okay, so heres the review. Great animations! I would say low beginner for now. What you should work on is to add some more movement to both dinosaurs. The neoventar's movement only exists in it's front half, while the other half is completely idle. So you might want to try putting in multiple movements at the same time. For the acro, there is some improvement for that, but many parts still remain idle, but still will eventually move. Also, both animations are pretty choppy, so you might also want to work on the easing and smoothness. Besides that, those are some nice animations! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
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DaJetsnake
Yutyrannus
Gotta be nema chan ging
Posts: 87 Likes Received: 4
Youtube: Jet Snake
Steam: jetsnake1
Favourite Dinosaur: Allosaurus fragilis
Favourite Animal: Canis lupus
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Post by DaJetsnake on Mar 5, 2016 19:57:00 GMT
T-H-ank you for the honest review. Here's a new one:
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Hainosaurus is now congeneric with Tylosaurus. I guess that means that it's Tylosaurus bernardi now.
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Macrophyseter Pictures
Discord>Skype, whatever that is.
I heard inhaling it helps your nose congestion and all.
Whatha's dayuinausoar?
Tylosaurinae mosasaurs
http://i.imgur.com/Ai7iPV0.png
003CFF
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Post by superhamdav on Mar 6, 2016 3:17:01 GMT
i see some improvement. But what you would work on is to make the cycle a little slower and less sudden. Plus, when the allosaurus lifts its leg, it should be higher.
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Post by Theropod on Mar 6, 2016 19:00:51 GMT
I like your movements, you're never afraid to try new sort of movements! I'd suggest working on onion skin trailing a bit, do that slowly so that you get a hold of it, I would say it is more important than easing right now.
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DaJetsnake
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Favourite Dinosaur: Allosaurus fragilis
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Post by DaJetsnake on Mar 6, 2016 20:26:05 GMT
Thanks, yeah, In the next animation I'm gonna try animate 3 things at the same time. I'll see how that goes
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Hainosaurus is now congeneric with Tylosaurus. I guess that means that it's Tylosaurus bernardi now.
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superhamdav
Macrophyseter Pictures
Discord>Skype, whatever that is.
I heard inhaling it helps your nose congestion and all.
Whatha's dayuinausoar?
Tylosaurinae mosasaurs
http://i.imgur.com/Ai7iPV0.png
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Post by superhamdav on Mar 7, 2016 5:29:43 GMT
great, go for more! ps Animating multiple stks at the same time has nothing to do with skill. Its al about the patience.
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Post by Theropod on Mar 7, 2016 18:04:18 GMT
Actually, it does have to do with "skill" - depending on what he meant, he could have meant more segments at the same time, leading to a less stiff animation which does improve the rank.
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Hainosaurus is now congeneric with Tylosaurus. I guess that means that it's Tylosaurus bernardi now.
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superhamdav
Macrophyseter Pictures
Discord>Skype, whatever that is.
I heard inhaling it helps your nose congestion and all.
Whatha's dayuinausoar?
Tylosaurinae mosasaurs
http://i.imgur.com/Ai7iPV0.png
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Post by superhamdav on Mar 7, 2016 19:44:24 GMT
he means multiple dinosaurs at the same time, not parts thou
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Post by Theropod on Mar 7, 2016 20:16:27 GMT
He said things. Not dinosaurs. As far as I know, "things" could mean parts.
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DaJetsnake
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Gotta be nema chan ging
Posts: 87 Likes Received: 4
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Favourite Dinosaur: Allosaurus fragilis
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Post by DaJetsnake on Mar 8, 2016 1:27:15 GMT
I meant dinosaurs. However I do intend have some sort of wound. Also someone's head is gonna get ripped off Also superhamdav I did not intend for that animation to be 'skill' related, I just want to try something new, mostly I want to kill a herbivore >
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And they say Swans and Geese were the same animal :P
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Post by parasaurolophus on Mar 8, 2016 1:28:51 GMT
I meant dinosaurs. However I do intend have some sort of wound. Also someone's head is gonna get ripped off Also superhamdav I did not intend for that animation to be 'skill' related, I just want to try something new, mostly I want to kill a herbivore > *glup* .-.
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DaJetsnake
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Gotta be nema chan ging
Posts: 87 Likes Received: 4
Youtube: Jet Snake
Steam: jetsnake1
Favourite Dinosaur: Allosaurus fragilis
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DaJetsnake
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Post by DaJetsnake on Mar 8, 2016 1:30:32 GMT
I meant dinosaurs. However I do intend have some sort of wound. Also someone's head is gonna get ripped off Also superhamdav I did not intend for that animation to be 'skill' related, I just want to try something new, mostly I want to kill a herbivore > *glup* .-. Don't worry it won't be you.... Just a certain unlucky, lonely ceratopsian from another planet.
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superhamdav
Hainosaurus is now congeneric with Tylosaurus. I guess that means that it's Tylosaurus bernardi now.
3,381
January 2016
superhamdav
Macrophyseter Pictures
Discord>Skype, whatever that is.
I heard inhaling it helps your nose congestion and all.
Whatha's dayuinausoar?
Tylosaurinae mosasaurs
http://i.imgur.com/Ai7iPV0.png
003CFF
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Post by superhamdav on Mar 8, 2016 1:40:15 GMT
go for it, it'll be epic. Now, kill some parasaurolophus's, will you?
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